Thanks Mark, I’m glad you found something to use. I’m trying to wean myself off this tendency in my writing. It’s letting go of control I guess. Hard but I know it would improve my writing if I was more inclined to trust the poem to do all the lifting.
I think this is excellent. It is one thing to have a nice theoretical framework. It is quite another to apply it.
Thanks Ian that is very kind. It’s a work in progress. There’s another one out tomorrow with a different failure point. Thanks for reading the post
Thanks, Adam. I've already axed a line in the current work in progress as a result of #7.
A very timely reminder.
Thanks Mark, I’m glad you found something to use. I’m trying to wean myself off this tendency in my writing. It’s letting go of control I guess. Hard but I know it would improve my writing if I was more inclined to trust the poem to do all the lifting.